So anyway, I took it down everywhere and am gonna poke and prod at it some more. The only reason I even posted it in the first place was because it was getting on my nerves. I've been messing with it for over a week and it usually doesn't take me that long to pump something out. I think the genre being different and the angst being so heavy its weighing the story down so much and my attempt to mix in the humor with it didn't do much for the story in general.
So here's to attempting to fix it and I hope I can get something to happen, otherwise I'll be sad to see it go nowhere. :(
Well damn. I just got a totally new idea now. I just watched a fanvid that is like, so fkn fantastic that I have asked if I can write a fic companion piece to it. Because yeah. It was really that awesome. And maybe with writing that, it will help me get my other one together. So here's to hoping!
I'm super excited to write this fic, you have no idea. Here is the video. Watch it, because it rocks. It was made by missjigsaw23. (I really need to do another rec post.)